9/14/00
Continued discussion of "Aunt Jennifer's Tigers"
What happens when you change the tigers to rabbits?
How does the relationship between AJ and the rabbits differ from the
relationships between AJ and the tigers?
How does changing the poem change the meaning?
aspects of the poem are interdependent esp. rhythm, metaphor, so
"In an Artist's Studio"
Structure
(the alternative: Shakespearean format
Each 4 line unit rhymes abab, contains a single image Concluding couplet draws a conclusion that connects the images)
These images are all highly feminine, highly ranked, innocent, positive , beloved
what "is" and what "was"
reality vs dream
portrait vs real woman
she does not exist at all,
she fails to exist as he wants her to be,
she has changed
she is dead
dim, wan waiting vs hope true kind, fair, joyful
it is up to the reader to assert what they believe is the correct one